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Pssst: tomorrow's the LAST DAY to grab Sales Page In An Hour at the one-time introductory price... After tomorrow at midnight (Eastern Time), the price goes up substantially, and the 3 exclusive bonuses disappear too. -------------------------- So THIS landed in my inbox yesterday. From Jack -- a subscriber (not a customer) -- who's been reading my emails for a few months now: "Hey Csaba ...just my opinion but I think your sales page with AI falls very flat. At no point for me did it capture your passion or voice.
It also had numerous spelling issues and tense errors that frankly immediately make it feel like AI "slop" and not you. There definitely is promise but it's still not a tool id use.
Don't get me wrong ...in general I like your voice ..I just dont see it in this ...yet... Jack"
Ouch :) Now look... Let's just forget about the fact that Jack is grilling me for "spelling issues and tense errors"... ...while I counted at least 9 typos in his short email. I'm willing to ignore that obvious irony... The more important thing is this: I could've quietly deleted this and only ever shown you the love letters I get... But Jack's email might be the most useful one I received all week! Why? Because he said out loud the exact fear I KNOW some of you have about Sales Page In An Hour: "If I build my sales page with AI... won't it just be more slop?"And that's a completely fair fear. (heck, that fear is the reason I built the tool the way I did!) So instead of replying with something like: "No no, trust me, bro"... I did what any self-respecting marketing nerd would do. I took the entire sales page -- the one Jack says feels like AI slop, the one built BY the Sales Page In An Hour tool itself -- and fed it into not one... but MULTIPLE AI detectors on the internet. Here's the result from GPTZero: "We are highly confident this text is entirely human" "0% AI" Sounds good to me. And here's Grammarly's detector: "2% appears to be AI-generated" (that remaining 2% is probably the FAQ section on the page, btw) Still good. I could share more screenshots, but I don't want to negatively impact this email's deliverability. And I think I made my point. But my favorite part in Jack's email? His strongest "evidence" that the page was AI? "It also had numerous spelling issues and tense errors that frankly immediately make it feel like AI "slop" and not you"My friend... The reality is the exact opposite 😂 Maybe you don't know this, but AI doesn't make typos! AI writes too "perfectly"... ...which is literally one of the main ways detectors catch it. And those little imperfections he spotted? That's ME. That's what happens when a human takes the tool's 80-85% draft and runs it through his own hands late at night. The typos aren't the machine's fingerprints on my page... They're MINE. (I did go and fix a few of them this morning, though... genuinely thanks for the free proofread, Jack) All this brings me to the real point of this email: Sales Page In An Hour was NEVER designed to replace you.It builds the strategy and the 80% WITH you...And then YOUR voice & "imperfections" go on top of thatThe result is a page that sells like a strategist planned it... And reads like a human wrote it. Because one did. But hey -- don't take my word for it... (And don't take Jack's either) Read the page and judge for yourself > But please do it sooner rather than later... Because this introductory launch offer ends TOMORROW. And not only will you have to pay much more for this after that... You'll also lose your chance to grab the 3 awesome bonuses I'm bundling with this -Csaba P.S. -- just to be crystal clear: this is NOT a dunk on Jack. He said what he thought to my face instead of behind my back. And he caught a couple of real typos while he was at it. That's worth more to me than a hundred "great email!" replies. But on the "AI slop" verdict specifically? Sorry, my friend... I have to disagree. And so does GPTZero :) |
Hi - I'm Csaba, a former psychology researcher turned lead activation & conversion expert. I help creators engineer profitable email funnels and persuasive marketing messages… so they can create consistent cash flow while impacting more people around them. Get my FREE BOOK, The Rapid Lead Activator when you sign up...
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